Beautiful in My Eyes

A Special World

(I come across this poem and then I was taken aback immediately by its beauty. I would like to share it with you and hope sincerely every couple of lovers can be happy in their whole life.)

A special world for you and me
A special bond one cannot see
It wraps us up in its cocoon
And holds us fiercely in its womb.

Its fingers spread like fine spun gold
Gently nestling us to the fold
Like silken thread it holds us fast
Bonds like this are meant to last.

And though at times a thread may break
A new one forms in its wake
To bind us closer and keep us strong
In a special world, where we belong.


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Comments

  • edited December 2009
    i can see that u have a beautiful eyes, you voice is so sweet and u have such a charming accent, your breath just take me away,you sophisticated ohh you are so ravishing and irresistible !!! ...

    to bad am not mean to be with u,, why?......b-coz i cannot see may way, am using kane...blindman..
  • I don't read a lot of books or am knowledgeable about a lot of poems but I like this one. Thanks vanessa859! I especially like the last verse.
  • is that one of Emily dickinson's poems or Abraham Lincoln?
  • When I look into your beautiful eyes
    I see a world of many precious things.
    Lying warmly beside you beneath the night skies
    Love is safely contained in your angel wings.
    You've clearly touched me deep within my heart
    Only showing all the joyful love we possess.
    Uncoil the rough twine that has kept us apart
    Making my only journey for you a success.
    Although absence of you gives me such heartache
    Remember the times we're side by side,
    Remember the long walks along the lake
    You'll forever remain my only true bride.
  • edited December 2009
    lol
  • Their was four hundred ugly people that die and went to heaven.
    The lord said to them I will grant all you guys one with each person.
    The first person said "oh, I want to be beautiful".. b o o m...
    The lord turn her into a beautiful lady...
    The next person said "I want to be handsome" b o o m...
    The lord turn him into a handsome man...
    This goes on and on...Handsome for all men, and beautiful for all women..
    Then the last person was laughing so hard...cant kept himself from laughing....
    The Lord ask him what is soo funny, still he couldnt stop on laughing...
    The lord ask him...okay what is your one wish that I shall grant it...
    The man said " I wish that all of those people are ugly...
    B O O M!!!!
  • Lemme guess... you folks just snapped or popped your virignities, didn't ya! Ha ha ha ha! If you want poem, get us some shakespearean pieces, but not a streetside poems someone whipped 'em up while aboard the subway or waiting for the bus to arrive on a piece of toilet paper ... Have fun!
  • This to the Janitor...

    Although, written down on any form of paper...
    A poem is poem no matter where it comes from.
    If you truly know and understand shakespears words,
    Then you wouldn't laugh at others thoughts and feelings
    Of how they, themselves express out to others.
  • For everyone out there...

    Write, Write freewillingly...
    Writing frees the mind and thoughts becomes more clear.
    So write..no matter what and no matter who says anything.
    Just Write.
  • Yo mikey! whaz with the mushy stuff man! get outta here!
  • HELL WITH POEMS!
  • So many poets in this forum! Well, I like your contributions, be they beautiful or just amusing. Go ahead, poets! imageimageimageimageimageimageimageimageimageimageimageimageimageimageimageimageimageimageimageimageimage
  • don't let love blinded you! only fools easily fall for sweet words!
  • Love does not blind you. You blind yourself with false expectations. When it all comes toppling down, it was not because of love. It was because you set your expectations out of reach and did not work to preserve and nurture love itself.
    Words and poetry are a form of expression. Actions are the literal meanings behind them.
  •  Interesting!

  • Man poetry is they key to a women heart.
  • Hmmmmm...actions speak louder than words. But sometimes, words are just as important.
  • its like this you think,speak,then you do.
  • Yeah words are important only if it comes from the Heart.

  • .. my performance speaks louder then any of my words but my words are as important espeicially when  coming straight from the heart.

     

  • hey misfit can you write me some poems! pretty please,with fried fish and coconut milk on the side,
  • edited May 2012
    Nice poems!imageimageimage

  • wah...wah. LOL

    [waves@Misfit] aimisiuani! :)
  • Reaper,

    in silence you appear,
    not a sound we hear,
    not a sign you are near,
    and you fill us with fear.

    A chill fills the air,
    the night ever fair,
    the "reaper" would dare,
    take away your air.

    Reaper...not sure what u wanted...so yeah...a grim reaper poem just for you! :)
  • :'( these poetry gives me the GOOSEBUMPS ! 
  • And why the hell are you reading  then?
    >:)..  I like this.
  • me love me like me admire the poem.

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